haiku 5-7-5 |
Post Reply | Page 12> |
Author | ||
grafin
Senior Member Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Status: Offline Points: 6701 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
Posted: 09.Jun.2008 at 20:25 |
|
nit za ustvarjanje haikujev.. originalno japonskih trovrsticnih besedilc, ki ujamejo trenutek..
haiku ima precej oblik.. na tej niti se gremo samo eno, bolj klasicno formo: 1 vrstica ima 5 zlogov 2 vrstica 7 in 3 vrstica spet 5 zlogov. ni sploh nujno, da se rima.. to je moj drugi haiku v lajfu: na rdeckast vecer, zogobrc ustvarja nemir, sama grem na pir. |
||
se oprasicujem za oftopik :>
|
||
Buco
Senior Member Joined: 17.Nov.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 2119 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
drek je v skretu
smrdi po crkovini - potegnem vodo. |
||
Banshee
Groupie Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Location: Novo mesto Status: Offline Points: 603 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
Paranoid zgaga,
čikfajt je bedarija, haiku pa zmaga. |
||
Rockers of the underground, black and heavy is our sound! (Running Wild)
|
||
Ruda
Senior Member Joined: 18.Nov.2007 Status: Offline Points: 1343 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
hajkuji so bolj brezvezna iznajdba kot praskalo
|
||
www.rkc.si
|
||
Guests
Guest Group |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
Tristo kosmatih
morje hik hik morje hik pejmo na morje |
||
Buco
Senior Member Joined: 17.Nov.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 2119 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
fabo je peder
rudl nima rok pa nog buco to sem jaz. |
||
Hopsy
Senior Member Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1320 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
nič pametnega
mi ne pade na pamet buco je gay ja |
||
... Each morning when I awake, I experience again a supreme pleasure - that of being Hopsy ...
|
||
Nordy Nuš
Newbie Joined: 18.Nov.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 238 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
pozna je ura
ko pijem vino rdeče postla me čaka |
||
Madafaka
Groupie Joined: 19.Nov.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 660 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
Ne bi rad biu preveč pametn, sam men se zdi da je tale tvoj haiku bl 6-8-5 varianta, ali pač?
|
||
Raul artista, siempre Madridista!
|
||
khors
Newbie Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Status: Offline Points: 219 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
žejen pir bi piu,
žejen žejen žejen sm, žejn še vedno |
||
Agencija za sramoto in slab vtis d.o.o.
|
||
grafin
Senior Member Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Status: Offline Points: 6701 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
delno mas prav.. :)
skupaj nama bo uspelo.. :)
nar-dec-kast-ve-cer (5)
zo-go-brc-us-tva-rja-ne-mir (8)
sa-ma-grem-na-pir (5)
ajde spreminjam..
na rdeckast vecer,
zogobrc dviga nemir, sama grem na pir. :)
|
||
se oprasicujem za oftopik :>
|
||
PiWi
Senior Member Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Location: Russian Federation Status: Offline Points: 6068 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
toplo je in tko
vse zeleno she prevech me ni zaznat sploh |
||
Verjeti! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=smKeH_YEZX8&feature=related * http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e4fUk5XhGGk * http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y50GEFjKsZE *
|
||
Mrtupevc
Senior Member Joined: 12.Jan.2008 Location: Bangladesh Status: Offline Points: 1820 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
singonij je lep
splezal skoraj do stropa
posekal ga - konc
|
||
Ole - OleOleOle;
Peterle - zakaj pa ne? |
||
Person-man
Organizator Joined: 26.Nov.2007 Location: Isle Of Man Status: Offline Points: 5111 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
moj anus lebdi
kokain zelo diši fukam babice Aja, če si naredim malo reklame. V topicu moji stripi sem uploadal en strip, katerega druga polovica je celotna v haikujih. Imenuje se Življenjski ciklus faznbriferja ^^ |
||
Buco
Senior Member Joined: 17.Nov.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 2119 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
lalalalala
lalalalalalala lalalalala |
||
Guests
Guest Group |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
ti si pa ne izviren, kr si vse zloge dal iste! |
||
Buco
Senior Member Joined: 17.Nov.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 2119 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
ne pa ne, ti si
tle si neki pametn raj mi dej en per. |
||
grafin
Senior Member Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Status: Offline Points: 6701 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
satanov haiku
kuhaj kuhaj kul haiku satanov haiku |
||
se oprasicujem za oftopik :>
|
||
Katana
Senior Member Joined: 25.Dec.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 1838 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
lol to je še bolš k vici in skor bolš k anekdote
Edited by Freia - 10.Jun.2008 at 18:20 |
||
Buco
Senior Member Joined: 17.Nov.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 2119 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
satanov haiku
sploh ne gre tko kot ta tvoj ti nimaš pojma |
||
grafin
Senior Member Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Status: Offline Points: 6701 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
potem pa bucek
mi povej, razsvetli me kako gre zares |
||
se oprasicujem za oftopik :>
|
||
grafin
Senior Member Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Status: Offline Points: 6701 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
pisuka, ze spet
nekdo potegnil vode ni, zdaj pa smrdi.. |
||
se oprasicujem za oftopik :>
|
||
Buco
Senior Member Joined: 17.Nov.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 2119 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
satan, car sveta
tiča velkega ima kamšot u faco |
||
Buco
Senior Member Joined: 17.Nov.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 2119 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
to je bil haiku
un taprav od satana zdej veš kakšen je |
||
Banshee
Groupie Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Location: Novo mesto Status: Offline Points: 603 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
Škoda, da ni rim,
v vaših haikujih teh, zdaj igrat grem meh. |
||
Rockers of the underground, black and heavy is our sound! (Running Wild)
|
||
Buco
Senior Member Joined: 17.Nov.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 2119 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
hajku ne rab rim
ker rime so za pedre k nosjo ledre. |
||
Norther
Senior Member Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Location: LA Status: Offline Points: 1513 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
Buco raztura
grafinka vse zafura cikfajt bolj rula. Edited by Norther - 11.Jun.2008 at 00:20 |
||
Beer sells...........and I'm buying
|
||
khors
Newbie Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Status: Offline Points: 219 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
pjen sm matkurba,
jebem ti pir pofukan, jutri muc muc muc |
||
Agencija za sramoto in slab vtis d.o.o.
|
||
Buco
Senior Member Joined: 17.Nov.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 2119 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
kakos loh pijan
vse skp nč nisva spila par perov pa vin |
||
Banshee
Groupie Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Location: Novo mesto Status: Offline Points: 603 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
Buco ga žinga,
Khors ga malo manj nese, leder je tr00 kvlt. |
||
Rockers of the underground, black and heavy is our sound! (Running Wild)
|
||
Buco
Senior Member Joined: 17.Nov.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 2119 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
dej no mir benši
kao nekej znaš hajkuje kje je pa robi? |
||
MORDRED
Newbie Joined: 04.Dec.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 225 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
evo ti ga evo
pa gledaj s njega
Sarajevo
|
||
I KILL.....you die....I EAT...!!!
|
||
PiWi
Senior Member Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Location: Russian Federation Status: Offline Points: 6068 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
pes najlepshi je
machka osvajalka je teritorija |
||
Verjeti! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=smKeH_YEZX8&feature=related * http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e4fUk5XhGGk * http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y50GEFjKsZE *
|
||
Šufko
Groupie Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Location: Saudi Arabia Status: Offline Points: 653 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
glej kolk je ura
dvanajst oseminštirideset ti si zaumret |
||
Za letenje ne rabiš kril !!!
|
||
grafin
Senior Member Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Status: Offline Points: 6701 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
sufko pa mordred,
kaj ne znata prestevat? mora biti red! Edited by grafin - 11.Jun.2008 at 14:32 |
||
se oprasicujem za oftopik :>
|
||
grafin
Senior Member Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Status: Offline Points: 6701 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
nic se mi ne da
sm se odlocila pa da grem na sprehod |
||
se oprasicujem za oftopik :>
|
||
grafin
Senior Member Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Status: Offline Points: 6701 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
tu si se zmotil satan ma le vagino ki tice pozre |
||
se oprasicujem za oftopik :>
|
||
Mrtupevc
Senior Member Joined: 12.Jan.2008 Location: Bangladesh Status: Offline Points: 1820 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
sanjam kukuruz
kogito ergo sum - res?
saj nisem svinja
|
||
Ole - OleOleOle;
Peterle - zakaj pa ne? |
||
Buco
Senior Member Joined: 17.Nov.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 2119 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
ok ok nej ti bo
mogoče imaš ti prav ženske satanke. |
||
Šufko
Groupie Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Location: Saudi Arabia Status: Offline Points: 653 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
ne znam pa zla-gat ola-olu kaj pa zdaj ola oli |
||
Za letenje ne rabiš kril !!!
|
||
Mrtupevc
Senior Member Joined: 12.Jan.2008 Location: Bangladesh Status: Offline Points: 1820 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
Ne, ne, najbrž si mislil: "šte-ti znam o-la o-le
ne znam pa zla-gat o-la o-lu
kaj pa zdaj o-la o-li"
Ah, ja, ni kej, šufko je v grafinove haikuje uvedel slovenski ekspresionizem (7-9-7) Edited by Mrtupevc - 11.Jun.2008 at 15:22 |
||
Ole - OleOleOle;
Peterle - zakaj pa ne? |
||
Banshee
Groupie Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Location: Novo mesto Status: Offline Points: 603 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
Moji haikuji
so čisto dobri, da veš, Robi je doma. |
||
Rockers of the underground, black and heavy is our sound! (Running Wild)
|
||
Mighty Hammer
Senior Member Joined: 27.Nov.2007 Status: Offline Points: 3592 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
Mi smo mogli vsak let napisat pet haikujev, pol jih je pa učitlca
pobrala in najbolše so potem poslali na natečaj (no tisti dijaki so
dobil tudi 5-ko v redovalnico ).
Kljub temu, da so haikuji "ekstrmno" kratka pesniška oblika, znajo bit tut prov zanimivi. Nekateri povedo več kot marsikatera daljša pesem. |
||
Jan Ov Plain
Senior Member Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Location: China Status: Offline Points: 3235 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
Edited by Jan Ov Plain - 01.Jul.2008 at 00:44 |
||
Occam's razor can leave a scar, but it can remove the cancer so often caused by the poison of liars and imaginers.
Ignorant men raise questions that wise men answered a thousand years ago. |
||
saiysoFLAMER
Senior Member Joined: 17.Nov.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 1506 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
Dreade zdaj končno imam,
nobenemu jih ne dam, res je ni mi žal. eeeeeh |
||
grafin
Senior Member Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Status: Offline Points: 6701 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
makedonija,
klavnica klavnic bila. a sploh kdo to ve? |
||
se oprasicujem za oftopik :>
|
||
Person-man
Organizator Joined: 26.Nov.2007 Location: Isle Of Man Status: Offline Points: 5111 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
Lebdeči kruh,
prinašalec ljubezni, češnjev cvet |
||
Mrtupevc
Senior Member Joined: 12.Jan.2008 Location: Bangladesh Status: Offline Points: 1820 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
Sinus je en del,
glava zatrokirala,
počivancija...
|
||
Ole - OleOleOle;
Peterle - zakaj pa ne? |
||
grafin
Senior Member Joined: 16.Nov.2007 Status: Offline Points: 6701 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
z diktaturo je
kralj res po miz' udaru
in zajebu se
(na koga se to nanasa? nagrada: kladivo)
|
||
se oprasicujem za oftopik :>
|
||
Ventor
Senior Member Joined: 22.Nov.2007 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 2239 |
Post Options
Thanks(0)
|
|
Neeee haikujev! Jao ku mi gre na kurac to ...
|
||
www.myspace.com/kellermetal Hide your head or join the dead! |
||
Post Reply | Page 12> |
Tweet |
Forum Jump | Forum Permissions You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot create polls in this forum You cannot vote in polls in this forum |