haiku 5-7-5
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Topic: haiku 5-7-5
Posted By: grafin
Subject: haiku 5-7-5
Date Posted: 09.Jun.2008 at 20:25
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nit za ustvarjanje haikujev.. originalno japonskih trovrsticnih besedilc, ki ujamejo trenutek.. haiku ima precej oblik.. na tej niti se gremo samo eno, bolj klasicno formo: 1 vrstica ima 5 zlogov 2 vrstica 7 in 3 vrstica spet 5 zlogov. ni sploh nujno, da se rima.. to je moj drugi haiku v lajfu: na rdeckast vecer, zogobrc ustvarja nemir, sama grem na pir. ------------- se oprasicujem za oftopik :> |
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Posted By: Buco
Date Posted: 09.Jun.2008 at 20:35
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drek je v skretu smrdi po crkovini - potegnem vodo. |
Posted By: Banshee
Date Posted: 09.Jun.2008 at 20:38
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Paranoid zgaga, čikfajt je bedarija, haiku pa zmaga. ------------- Rockers of the underground, black and heavy is our sound! (Running Wild) |
Posted By: Ruda
Date Posted: 09.Jun.2008 at 20:46
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hajkuji so bolj brezvezna iznajdba kot praskalo
------------- www.rkc.si |
Posted By: Guests
Date Posted: 09.Jun.2008 at 21:18
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Tristo kosmatih
morje hik hik morje hik pejmo na morje |
Posted By: Buco
Date Posted: 09.Jun.2008 at 21:19
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fabo je peder rudl nima rok pa nog buco to sem jaz. |
Posted By: Hopsy
Date Posted: 09.Jun.2008 at 22:06
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nič pametnega mi ne pade na pamet buco je gay ja ------------- ... Each morning when I awake, I experience again a supreme pleasure - that of being Hopsy ... |
Posted By: Nordy Nuš
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 00:49
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pozna je ura ko pijem vino rdeče postla me čaka |
Posted By: Madafaka
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 00:56
Ne bi rad biu preveč pametn, sam men se zdi da je tale tvoj haiku bl 6-8-5 varianta, ali pač?  ------------- Raul artista, siempre Madridista! |
grafin wrote:Posted By: khors
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 09:09
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žejen pir bi piu, žejen žejen žejen sm, žejn še vedno ------------- Agencija za sramoto in slab vtis d.o.o. |
Posted By: grafin
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 10:49
delno mas prav.. :)
skupaj nama bo uspelo.. :)
nar-dec-kast-ve-cer (5)
zo-go-brc-us-tva-rja-ne-mir (8)
sa-ma-grem-na-pir (5)
ajde spreminjam..
na rdeckast vecer,
zogobrc dviga nemir, sama grem na pir. :)
------------- se oprasicujem za oftopik :> |
Posted By: PiWi
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 11:47
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toplo je in tko vse zeleno she prevech me ni zaznat sploh ------------- Verjeti! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=smKeH_YEZX8&feature=related * http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e4fUk5XhGGk * http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y50GEFjKsZE * |
Posted By: Mrtupevc
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 11:56
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singonij je lep
splezal skoraj do stropa
posekal ga - konc ------------- Ole - OleOleOle; Peterle - zakaj pa ne? |
Posted By: Person-man
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 12:08
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moj anus lebdi kokain zelo diši fukam babice Aja, če si naredim malo reklame. V topicu moji stripi sem uploadal en strip, katerega druga polovica je celotna v haikujih. Imenuje se Življenjski ciklus faznbriferja ^^ ------------- http://www.facebook.com/otorinolaringolog - KiborgSpužva Büking™ FB pejđ http://www.profanity.si/ - Profanity fuckzine I party with lemons |
Posted By: Buco
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 15:00
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lalalalala lalalalalalala lalalalala |
Posted By: Guests
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 17:06
ti si pa ne izviren, kr si vse zloge dal iste! 
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Posted By: Buco
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 17:37
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ne pa ne, ti si tle si neki pametn raj mi dej en per. |
Posted By: grafin
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 18:16
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satanov haiku kuhaj kuhaj kul haiku satanov haiku ------------- se oprasicujem za oftopik :> |
Posted By: Katana
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 18:20
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lol to je še bolš k vici in skor bolš k anekdote |
Posted By: Buco
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 19:12
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satanov haiku sploh ne gre tko kot ta tvoj ti nimaš pojma |
Posted By: grafin
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 19:37
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potem pa bucek mi povej, razsvetli me kako gre zares ------------- se oprasicujem za oftopik :> |
Posted By: grafin
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 19:41
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pisuka, ze spet nekdo potegnil vode ni, zdaj pa smrdi.. ------------- se oprasicujem za oftopik :> |
Posted By: Buco
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 21:11
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satan, car sveta tiča velkega ima kamšot u faco |
Posted By: Buco
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 21:12
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to je bil haiku un taprav od satana zdej veš kakšen je |
Posted By: Banshee
Date Posted: 10.Jun.2008 at 21:59
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Škoda, da ni rim, v vaših haikujih teh, zdaj igrat grem meh. ------------- Rockers of the underground, black and heavy is our sound! (Running Wild) |
Posted By: Buco
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 00:04
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hajku ne rab rim ker rime so za pedre k nosjo ledre. |
Posted By: Norther
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 00:15
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Buco raztura grafinka vse zafura cikfajt bolj rula. ------------- Beer sells...........and I'm buying |
Posted By: khors
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 00:29
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pjen sm matkurba, jebem ti pir pofukan, jutri muc muc muc ------------- Agencija za sramoto in slab vtis d.o.o. |
Posted By: Buco
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 00:33
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kakos loh pijan vse skp nč nisva spila par perov pa vin |
Posted By: Banshee
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 00:36
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Buco ga žinga, Khors ga malo manj nese, leder je tr00 kvlt. ------------- Rockers of the underground, black and heavy is our sound! (Running Wild) |
Posted By: Buco
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 00:41
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dej no mir benši kao nekej znaš hajkuje kje je pa robi? |
Posted By: MORDRED
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 11:06
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evo ti ga evo
pa gledaj s njega
Sarajevo ------------- I KILL.....you die....I EAT...!!! |
Posted By: PiWi
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 12:36
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pes najlepshi je machka osvajalka je teritorija ------------- Verjeti! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=smKeH_YEZX8&feature=related * http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e4fUk5XhGGk * http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y50GEFjKsZE * |
Posted By: Šufko
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 12:48
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glej kolk je ura dvanajst oseminštirideset ti si zaumret ------------- Za letenje ne rabiš kril !!! |
Posted By: grafin
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 14:31
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sufko pa mordred, kaj ne znata prestevat? mora biti red! ------------- se oprasicujem za oftopik :> |
Posted By: grafin
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 14:33
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nic se mi ne da sm se odlocila pa da grem na sprehod ------------- se oprasicujem za oftopik :> |
Posted By: grafin
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 14:39
tu si se zmotil satan ma le vagino ki tice pozre ------------- se oprasicujem za oftopik :> |
Posted By: Mrtupevc
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 14:46
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sanjam kukuruz
kogito ergo sum - res?
saj nisem svinja ------------- Ole - OleOleOle; Peterle - zakaj pa ne? |
Posted By: Buco
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 14:53
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ok ok nej ti bo mogoče imaš ti prav ženske satanke. |
Posted By: Šufko
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 15:09
ne znam pa zla-gat ola-olu kaj pa zdaj ola oli ------------- Za letenje ne rabiš kril !!! |
Posted By: Mrtupevc
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 15:21
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Ne, ne, najbrž si mislil: "šte-ti znam o-la o-le
ne znam pa zla-gat o-la o-lu
kaj pa zdaj o-la o-li"
 Ah, ja, ni kej, šufko je v grafinove haikuje uvedel slovenski ekspresionizem (7-9-7)  ------------- Ole - OleOleOle; Peterle - zakaj pa ne? |
Posted By: Banshee
Date Posted: 11.Jun.2008 at 19:57
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Moji haikuji so čisto dobri, da veš, Robi je doma. ------------- Rockers of the underground, black and heavy is our sound! (Running Wild) |
Posted By: Mighty Hammer
Date Posted: 30.Jun.2008 at 19:08
Mi smo mogli vsak let napisat pet haikujev, pol jih je pa učitlca
pobrala in najbolše so potem poslali na natečaj (no tisti dijaki so
dobil tudi 5-ko v redovalnico  ).Kljub temu, da so haikuji "ekstrmno" kratka pesniška oblika, znajo bit tut prov zanimivi. Nekateri povedo več kot marsikatera daljša pesem. |
Posted By: Jan Ov Plain
Date Posted: 30.Jun.2008 at 20:24
------------- Occam's razor can leave a scar, but it can remove the cancer so often caused by the poison of liars and imaginers. Ignorant men raise questions that wise men answered a thousand years ago. |
Posted By: saiysoFLAMER
Date Posted: 30.Jun.2008 at 23:12
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Dreade zdaj končno imam, nobenemu jih ne dam, res je ni mi žal.  eeeeeh------------- http://www.facebook.com/RoadkillBBQ - http://www.facebook.com/RoadkillBBQ 
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Posted By: grafin
Date Posted: 24.Sep.2009 at 12:14
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makedonija, klavnica klavnic bila. a sploh kdo to ve? ------------- se oprasicujem za oftopik :> |
Posted By: Person-man
Date Posted: 24.Sep.2009 at 12:22
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Lebdeči kruh, prinašalec ljubezni, češnjev cvet ------------- http://www.facebook.com/otorinolaringolog - KiborgSpužva Büking™ FB pejđ http://www.profanity.si/ - Profanity fuckzine I party with lemons |
Posted By: Mrtupevc
Date Posted: 30.Sep.2009 at 11:04
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Sinus je en del,
glava zatrokirala,
počivancija... ------------- Ole - OleOleOle; Peterle - zakaj pa ne? |
Posted By: grafin
Date Posted: 30.Sep.2009 at 14:29
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z diktaturo je
kralj res po miz' udaru
in zajebu se
(na koga se to nanasa? nagrada: kladivo) ------------- se oprasicujem za oftopik :> |
Posted By: Ventor
Date Posted: 13.Oct.2009 at 23:59
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Neeee haikujev! Jao ku mi gre na kurac to ...
------------- www.myspace.com/kellermetal Hide your head or join the dead! |
Posted By: Ejsi_Disi
Date Posted: 14.Oct.2009 at 08:46
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Poljaki nula, naši gladko zmagajo. Gremo na Brnik!
------------- Rock n' roll ain't noise pollution. |
Posted By: Guests
Date Posted: 18.Oct.2009 at 23:53
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posluš ti mene
cigu migu zna en vic
ki se reče štric
,
pesek hou hou laj~
~a kaj ko ni denarja
za en cigu kvdrtn
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Posted By: Guests
Date Posted: 18.Oct.2009 at 23:54
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Posted By: Mrtupevc
Date Posted: 19.Oct.2009 at 11:19
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Što voliš drek sa klorom,
herzlich willkommen,
pozdravljen v haiku klub!
O peesda, haiku zakon sem obrnil na glavo (5-7-5 ---> 7-5-7). Naj mi teta grafi oprostijo mojo jutranjo velezmoto, brisal ga pa ne bom, k se tko fajn sliš no  ------------- Ole - OleOleOle; Peterle - zakaj pa ne? |
Posted By: grafin
Date Posted: 20.Oct.2009 at 16:48
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ehehehehe
vele od zdaj si zmoté
grafi oprosti
:) ------------- se oprasicujem za oftopik :> |
Posted By: AishaBerg
Date Posted: 24.Oct.2009 at 15:28
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Haikus are easy but sometimes they dont make sense refridgerator ------------- ΑΠΟ ΠΑΝΤΟΣ ΚΑΚΟΔΑΙΜΟΝΟΣ! |
Posted By: Guests
Date Posted: 31.Oct.2009 at 04:50
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aaaaaa aaaaaa aaaaaaaa aaaaaaaa aaaaaa!!!!!!!!!
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